Spiritree

Thanks for taking the time to review, jMin & rebecca. ;0)~ :lol:

I open my eyes My feet are delicately placed in-between sheets and limbs His arms are wrapped around me, he smiles in his slumber, and I sigh It is an ...

My goodness!? Three strikes and your out! Don't do it! Don't stop writing poetry! Writing is supposed to feel like this-- like every word you put to the paper is ...

I like the idea that every day of the week there is a new growth for the speaker of the poem. I take it that you're pro-life. Since you writing ...

I just found out they're making a movie that will be out later this year! It will have Queen Latifah, Jennifer Hudson, and Dakota Fanning. I'm so excited! It should ...

Maybe you'll need a break before you sit down and start writing again, to absorb these emotions. I've found that poetry that is described as angsty tends to be younger ...

The simplistic style is so beautiful. It really makes it a true lullaby. The sing-song rhythm of the piece made me want to go to sleep! Some poetry is best ...

Wow! Okay, first off, I loved the intro to this piece. I thought the first line was great, it hooked from just from that alone. I admire that a lot, ...

My pain is a tremble in the Earth. For thousands of miles it stretches deep, into the dark core. It feels hot like passion, smells like the burnt out bourbon ...

I think all of these tips are great-- and just go for it! It will be disconnected enough flow-wise from the story itself that you can just cut it out ...

I'm not sure if this was mentioned, but The Artist's Way by Julia Cameron is amazing, amazing, amazing-- especially for writers.

THAT. Whenever I'm reviewing a piece, the word 'that' always sticks out to me. I cross out every one, and it is so much nicer without.

Wow! A friend sent me a battered, dog-eared copy of this book with a lovely note saying she could only think of me while she read it. I must say, ...

I agree that you should stick to what you know, but certainly you must know a bit of romance. Just imagine what you might write to the person you admire. ...

Thank you so much for your greetings! I'm sorry I haven't responded sooner, I've been having a lot of trouble signing on to the site. I'll answer the questions now... ...