SpiritedWolfe

Wolfie, Sam doesn't have a very good relationship with his parents. Not all kids do. There's a backstory to it all :P Plus, the protaganist is not a perfect person, ...

Understandable. It doesn't matter either way.

I do see the irony in that, since in chapter two another one is introduced. Glad I helped, keep it up :D

Well, even in chapter, details are very important. Once again, the little things really help make your characters real. For example: In the first chapter of my novel, two characters ...

Thanks for the review (better late than never xD). I do want to mention, he wasn't actually going insane in the beginning. He just thought he was. Could have progressed ...

Dang, I've been lacking in those descriptions, haven't I? Probably should make up for those in the next one xD THE WEAKNESS IS SHOWING.

Oh okay. That makes sense.

I tried to make Gylinda vague purposefully, since the characters themselves don't know much about it, since they've never been there before. I believe they were described in the previous ...

I wasn't trying to be mean, I was just trying to help you improve. I'm sorry if I sounded harsh, but please don't take it like I'm trying to put ...

Oh my goodness I had no idea xD I see that now!

Haha!!! I am too awesome for you!

Katya, I wrote this in FIVE minutes xD You expect me to be perfect when i literally was rushed to get it finished? Anyway, all poems don't have to rhyme, ...

Well I did. There is nothing wrong with the truth.

Oh I guess I missed that. Sorry xD

Also, I didnt intend for Sam to have 'mother problems' xD thank you for point that out. Even though I probably won't do much now, when I go back for ...