SpiritedWolfe

Thanks for the nitpicks (my brain went dead while writing this Saturday xD) and for the review, I'm glad you liked it! Yes TLMS challenge was to mention a well ...

MINA POWER. Thank you for the review and I'm glad you liked it. Your first nitpick isn't an actual nitpick, that's how its supposed to be. Sam is the one ...

I don't think I've told how the powers are gained yet have I...? I should do that soon... Thanks for the review though, and I'm glad you liked it!

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Ohhh, Noelle. You could have not been more wrong xD That's all I'm going to say. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it :D

Thank you so much for pointing those out! Glad you liked it :D

That works xD

My friend told me to xD Don't judge me ;P

Glad you liked it! :) Seriously, the plot twist at the end came to me as I was writing the third to last paragraph. Glad it worked well.

Isn't my lightning quickness for reviewing amazing? I've been polishing it for review day.

Oh no! The ending was spoiled by your impatience xD Yes, originally, that's all Carsten's purpose was. He was supposed to be 'some guy' that Sam just happened to know ...

Much better now? So violent Sam, so violent...

Haha! Thanks for pointing some of those things out xD Writer's Block struck again, and I really had to rush this to get it out by the deadline. (And proof ...

Yes, he is a friend, he was killed because he was caugh with Syrin Powers.

Thanks so much! Yeah, the big thing is Carsten was killed in the second chapter (which is why Sam's so surprised). Glad you liked it! I'll be sure to fix ...