SpiritedWolfe

Thank you again for the review! ^^ I definitely see what you're saying about slowing down action, and I'll work on that! And I hope that the questions get answered ...

Oh goodness, sorry for all the typos xDD

Thank you so much for your review!! Your feedback is super helpful~ I'm trying to get a good balance between giving the reader enough information so they're not incredibly confusing, ...

Thanks for the review! Glad to you liked it ^^ And I believe it was mentioned a few times in this part, but the narrator's name is Hunter :)

Thanks for the review! ^^

Thank you for the review! :) I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it, and thank you for the suggestions. I also totally see what you're saying about the "normal woman" ...

Thank you for the review! I hadn't thought about the first sentence like that, so I can try to reword it ^^ I certainly hope that all of your questions ...

Thank you for reading! And I this is only the first half of the first chapter, so maybe it will become a little bit more clear what Splinter is by ...

Thank you very much for your review! Your suggestions were really helpful, especially about the structure, since I hadn't thought about maybe making some consistency in terms of the lists. ...

I saw you accidentally commented three times so I deleted the extras for you, haha. Thank you for the review!!! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the ...

Hi! Thank you so much for your review ^^ I really appreciate it! This was my NaNo novel so thanks for pointing out the parts that could use another look ...

Thanks, Hannah! That%u2019s a way to look at it that I hadn%u2019t thought about, and it%u2019s an interesting way to look at it. Maybe I%u2019ll be inspired to revisit and ...

This was a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing your experience.

Sorry for the confusion, but the point I was trying to make is I thought that Meet Day was happening at the capital of LandCorp %u2014 because I thought it ...

For English not being your first language, you are doing a really great job! ^^ And if you ever need help with grammar rules, I'm totally happy to provide some ...