SpiritedWolfe

Haha, no need to return the favor! I love reading your works (and I hope you didn't mind the spam xD), later tonight I will finally get too 15 and ...

Thanks so much! This is the start if your poetry reviewing career xD

Thanks for the review! I don't think it's very hard to tell I'm usually a prose writer, hence why it probably feels more like a short story xD

If it's not major, why is the entire thing named after it? Maybe change the title later on xD

By tag, I mean dialogue tag, like: "Hello," George said. The 'George said' is the tag. Alright, even if it a is a memory, the sentence doesn't make any sense. ...

Thank you soooo much! I probably won't edit very much here, but I will definitely take this into account next draft. I feel like my writing style starts to really ...

For your information, I've never read Narina, so please don't criticize me on that. Saying it's not original doesn't make sense to me, for I've never seen something like that. ...

It was only Sam thinking about Calvin. Calvin, the character himself, was not physically there. Also, it was merely coincidental that both Carsten and Calvin start with C's.

Haha, sorry about the swear word, I just felt it would fit, and I know some people don't like those ;) Thanks for the review! Also, Calvin didnt really 'disappear', ...

Thanks for the review! Yes, Sam is fascinated by trees, so I will take your advice in delving into that more. In the last quote, I left out a word, ...

Thanks so much!

Oh gotcha, I didn't think about that! Thanks for the advice! (I think that stuff is the quotation marks xD)

Thanks for the reviews (both if them)! I don't understand your second to last nitpick, elaborate please? It'll be clear about the very last part next chapter.

Thanks for the review! Yes, Carsten is dead, he was killed in the 2nd chapter, but he came back and it explained how last chapter (13). And no, if you're ...

Thanks for the review! And, the MC is male, I think in part two, Carsten says his name, Sam.