SpiritedWolfe

YOUR EXCUSES MEAN NOTHING IN THIS WAR. Thank you :3 and I see your life is busy.

Thank you for the review ^^ I had the italics and margins moved around for emphasis, splitting them across the page based on what they went with in the rest ...

Thank you so much! ^^

At the end of the last chapter, the two team captains led all the other members on their teams away, so just the Scouts are left behind. But I do ...

Thank you, Wolfie! Haha, I totally understand it being pretty hard to forget everything, having gone through 16 chapters of it. But it'll be easier to forget somethings. Lots of ...

Thanks a bunch! I'll definitely work on trying to include less exuberant dialogue tags xD Sometimes I don't even think about using 'says'. Also, I didn't think much about the ...

Drew was about 11 years older than Sam and he saw him like a brother. It's kind of hard to show that, but I'll work on it :P

*sniffs* Is it so hard to tell me female? I'll catch up eventually...

Thanks! What I meant by 'sad' in the third nitpick was pathetic, so I'll probably go through a replace that. I usually add the -ing ending after a comma. It's ...

That makes sense. I like it, just a little switch 30 chapters in is like, woah. Great job, with it.

Thanks! So, the first sentence, plot is used as plan to have more of a negative connotation. The second sentence you pulled out would make sense if you read the ...

Thanks! For your questions in the last part, Carsten has his reasons for doing what he did and 'the tonight' thing is talking about the Epolis. They get caught, and ...

This means a lot coming from you

Yes, better late than never xD Thank you so much! This review really made my day, and I realized the 'actually' thing, just never fixed here. Marrian was the girl ...

Thanks for the review! But first off, Sam's male. Second, if you've read the previous chapters, you'd know that if he gets caught, he dies. I think he's got a ...