SpiritedWolfe

I agree I could rephrase that xD Three people have told me it doesn't make much sense/is awkward. I'll be sure to work on that.

I wonder why people don't know that cobalt is a metal >.> I meant it in a way to say that it is made out of cobalt. And I may ...

With his mother being special, take the context that one, Syrin is illegal (and a Tedui Stone helps Syrnists) and she doesn't instantly scream and call the Guards and two, ...

Sam doesn't remember how it ended. Because of all that lovely Syrin stuff going on in his head. He can't really think straight, and his main goal of the moment ...

In the end, Syrin cancels out Syrin, apparently! XD And I like that you see it that way! Because, I was wondering how many people would see what Carsten is ...

Okay, Wolfie. I never proofread xD Never have. But the reason it may be so bad this time is one, this entire chapter was typed on my iPad and two, ...

So. With Sam attacking Ethan. Yes, he totally did. But, in the actually scene itself, Ethan was trying to play it off. Make it seem like it wasn't that big ...

Hey, belle! This isn't a review, because this doesn't seem like something you can really review much of. I will say that these kinds of things are probably much better ...

Thanks so much! When I entered the dead father, I was thinking someone would bring it up. But I did want it included somehow. Perhaps I'll take your suggestion of ...

I think something messed up with the word slashing ninja, because I don't know what you were going for there. Also the last couple quotes (except the last one, that ...

Oh, you're back!! Hia xD Thanks for the review ~ and help with the word slashing, because I need to do that more.

Please tell me there is a "Like x 400,000,000,000,000,000" button? >.< Perf.

Thanks for pointing those out! I was writing fairly quickly ^^ And thanks for the review ~

Thanks for the review ^^ The one part with 'you' is more there as a substitute to saying 'crafted by me' or 'myself'. It's just using the phrase 'yours truly.' ...

*psst* The place isn't called Syrin >.> I'm not sure if I have mentioned it yet, but it's called Nysir (so different, I know.) And in the dialogue, Sam asks ...