SpiritedWolfe

Hello there, Wolf here to review! Let's start off with some nit-picks... covered in marble tile The 'in' makes it seem sort of awkward, I would recommend to replace 'in' ...

Hey there, Tulip! Wolf here to review for you! So I'll start off with some nit-picks (though I don't have many). followed after her as she lead her through the ...

Hello there. So I'll start off with something little. I really liked this chapter and, even though I've never read any other chapters, I wasn't very confused. Little things did ...

Hello there, I am here to review! So first off, some nit-picks: Being glacial fed and provided necessary... I believe you meant to put 'fed , it provided', because otherwise ...

Hello there! I love this, and I can't wait to see you continue it, if you do! So first onto the nit-picks. I think some of this could be broken ...

Hello there, I have come to review your beautiful piece of work. I love all the descriptions in there, and its not too much to disturb the flow. I can ...

I thought this was beautifully written and I liked the mystery behind it. The characters were believable, but they lacked a description. I can someone see Ira's traits, but they ...

Hello, I will be your reviewer today! I will start off with a few nitpicks and errors. In the first paragraph, I believe it should be rang, instead of ringed. ...

Hello there! I've come to help review your wonderful writing. I want to start off by saying how much I enjoyed this piece. I loved the little details that just ...

Hello there, I have come to review your beautiful writing! First off, I thought it was wonderfully written, but I was a bit confused at times, but that might have ...

Even though I myself am not a big fan of vampire stories in general, I really like this chapter. I really liked the mystery in the beginning of it and ...