SpiritedWolfe

Hello Anan, Wolf here for a review. I just want to start off by saying one word: paragraphs. Please use them. It makes it so much easier to read. You ...

Heyo Noelle, I really like the intense ending... Oooooohh. My specialty is nitpicking, Grammar Nazi-ing, and searching for awkward fitting sentences, phrase or word. I couldn't find any. Not one. ...

Heyo Zont, Wolf here to review your wonderful masterpiece! First, some nitpicks: She could not believe it. So I know in the little blurb you said this was Lea's perspective, ...

Hello there, Wolf here for a review. I will start off with some nitpicks. “Where am I?” said the boy out loud... So you start off this chapter with this ...

Hello Madam, Wolf here for another review. I really like where this is headed. This is quite a unique concept, and I am assuming that this is set in modern ...

Hello there, Thunder! Wolf here for a review. So I just want to mention, the phrase 'has been in power' is perfectly fine, there's nothing wrong with it. So all ...

Hello there, Wolf here for a review. Can I just say wow. That was beautiful. I am not usually one to like these types of stories, but you convey this ...

Hello there, Wolf here to review! I really liked this piece, it flows really well and it has a good theme to it. To start off, I'll do some nitpicks: ...

Hello Kroft, Wolf here to review your masterpiece. I want to start off with the size. Even though it's short size makes it very easy to review, you should try ...

Hello there, Wolf is back for another review! So I remember in your last chapter it left off with a cliff hanger and left a lot of unanswered questions. Now ...

Hey Kenze, Dede here to review your masterpiece! First off some nitpicks: As I was calming myself from Britney ignoring me I didn’t notice where we were going until I ...

Hello there Zont, Wolf here to return a favor. So I see many of the little nit picks have been caught by other reviews so I'll dive straight into the ...

Hello Wolfie, your Wolf friend here to review. I can't tell you how amazing this is. I'm just in awe of how well written this chapter is. Not just this ...

I have one word for this: Bad. JUST KIDDING. I loved it so much! It really pulled with my heart strings. Even though I myself don't know the feeling, I ...

Hello Avalon, Wolf here to return the favor! I will be reviewing this as I read. I am very nit picky, so let's get started. Being transported by Valaine’s magic ...