SpiritedWolfe

Hey Raven, Wolf here for another review. I really liked the character interactions in this. Even though Brandon is like the 'bad guy' here, there's still this evil charm he ...

Hello NotRes, Wolf here for a review. So, Noelle covered most of the basic plot issues and concepts, so I'll just say a few things about that, which I felt, ...

Hello Proud, Wolf here for a review. Wow, I just really loved this. Your imagery was fantastic and really, once I got going, I was just got lost in your ...

Hello Liam, Wolf here for a review. Alright, some things I noticed: First, everytime new dialogue is stated, an new paragraph must be started. Here's an example from the work: ...

Hey Zont, Wolf here for a review. Little tiny nitpick for you: “Oh, I am old. I know many people, both dangerous and helpful. [ The last '[' should be ...

Hello polka, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling mistakes, for I am on a phone, with one hurt hand.) So a few little nitpicks: He had walked ...

Hello Swiftfur, Wolf here for a review. I've got one little nitpick: She looked very much human... I found this part a little awkwardly worded. I would recommend changing it ...

Hello Dawny, Wolf here for a review. First off, some nitpicks: Grace asked, curiosity taking over her features. I think this is a strange way to say that she's curious. ...

Hello Wolves, Wolfare here for a review. So this is a very... interesting piece. One problem I notice a lot is run-on sentences. I'm pretty sure most, if not all, ...

Hello Nekomimi, Wolf here for a review. I will start off with a little technical thing. I do notice that no paragraphs are used. So a new paragraph should be ...

Hello Wolfie, Wolfare here for a review. Oh my goodness. Must you tease us with such a short chapter? Haha, just kidding, but still, this is (as usual) very well ...

Hello Puppys, Wolf here for a review. First off, some nitpicks: I could tell he had a rough day looking for the dragons nest. How? How did she know? What ...

Hello Writer, Wolf here for a review. Wow, this was truly beautiful. Your imagery is just fantastic, and the descriptions are lovely. You have a serious talent here, having also ...

Hello Katya, Wolf here as requested. So I remember writing this with you, so I do notice some major changes. First off, the first line: "The kitty walks down the ...

Hello Ctor, Wolf here for a review. So I do notice a lot of the major issues were pointed out by the previous reviewer, and they're correct in what they ...