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Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 11
Hi Mea! As you can see, if I say I will do something "tomorrow", I actually mean "two days from now" xD But I'm here now! So, to start off, ...
Jun 8, 2021 -
Re: BC
Hi stacy! I'm here to leave a review here on your work :) First point I wanted to ask is if the name in your title is a pseudonym? While ...
May 31, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 10
Hi Mea! :) Back for yet another review on this lovely night. Yes! Another great installment. It's good that I pretty quickly got a few more answers to questions I ...
May 31, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 9, Part 2
Hi, Mea! Wow, I really got beaten to the punch on this one, haha. But I hope to see more soon! I'd like to echo the other two reviews and ...
May 31, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 9, Part 1
Hi Mea! And now I'm finally caught up :) I'm going to keep this review more general, because, honestly, I think your writing is really good. This section flowed super ...
May 27, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire, Interlude: Free Mage
Hi Mea! I'm finally back to review this even though I read it months ago, haha. You should definitely post more now that I'm catching up. First of all, I ...
May 25, 2021 -
Re: Act 1(The badminton field)
Hello ForeverYoung! You requested a review from me about a month ago, and I'm really sorry for taking so long to get to it! Now that I'm finished with school, ...
May 21, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 3]
Hi mordax! This will likely be a shorter review because I don't have much to say about this section! I thought this was your smoothest chapter, because you struck a ...
Feb 28, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 8
Hi Mea! This review will be a shorter one because I honestly don't have a whole lot I could say! I loved this chapter, and I thought you wrote it ...
Feb 28, 2021 -
Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose - Ch.I: Unforgotten Murder 2
Hi MailicedeNamedy! I'm glad to see that we were introduced to Leonard in this part! There's a lot more slow build up in this section of the chapter, which is ...
Feb 27, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 2]
Hi mordax! Back again :) I was really pleased with this chapter! I thought you did a great job of introducing our second main character, and also distinguishing her voice ...
Feb 26, 2021 -
Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 4.2
Hi Shady! :) I'll just right into it! First things first, the first two paragraphs have a bit of repetition in them that breaks up the flow of the paragraph ...
Feb 25, 2021 -
Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 4.1
Hi Shady! I'm back at it :) I quite liked this section, but I'm interested in seeing what the rest of this chapter has to offer. In the past couple ...
Feb 24, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 7
Cassia was not as pleased with Fyn kidnapping a child as I was xD Hi Mea! Back again to read this lovely novel. I loved this part. All of it ...
Feb 23, 2021 -
Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose - Ch.I: Unforgotten Murder 1
Hi MailicedeNamedy! You left a lovely review on my novel, so I wanted to return the favor ^^ I'll start with some notes I made as I read, and then ...
Feb 22, 2021
