Spilledink

Stunned. This is so touching, and real. So many people will related to boys, or even girls like this. You have talent, and you should use it more! My favorite ...

Wow. You did you research on space stuff. This is highly interesting, and I feel compelled to read more! Your choices of words definitely draw the reader in, and I ...

This poem is dark, I don't find it appealing, but it's pretty well written. Something I suggest you fix though is a couple grammar points. For instance "shes my liberty ...

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. My favorite line is probably the first verse: Darling little flower girl You’ve blossomed at your prime A gorgeous radiant flora Sweet little flower girl of mine ...

Wow. I am speechless. It's very emotional. I like that it's being written 'to' someone. You repeated words to let it sink into the mind. The poem itself is dark, ...

It's deep. Dark. But well written. You showed the pain and the mind wracking situation. I like that you added sentences such as "Luke fiddled with his hands, smoothing his ...