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Re: Of Sex and Security - Part One
Hm. No glaring flaws. I really did like it, it was well-written, and you did wonderfully with the dialogue, something I struggle with. However, at first your main character wasn't ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: The Wrath of Eternity
This was a good peice. I really liked the way it flowed and it seemed very 'real'. I, horribel wretch that I am, loved the ending. The fact that the ...
Jun 27, 2008 -
Re: A Lively Conversation Between Two Corpses (2)
'Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!!! First off, can I just compliment you on your title. Offbeat, yet accurate, just how I like em! You are an established writer. I can see that ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 1
It's wonderfully intriguing and you have this way with words. Sort of quirky and dark. Like evryone else is looking from above and you're there, peeking out from under the ...
Jun 25, 2008
