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I mean think about it, if you're on a mostly empty subway in the middle of the night and a gorgeous young guy/girl smiles at you from down the aisle, ...

I don't think sex is the sin. Lust is a fairly serious sin, but I don't think you can call all sex before marriage lust. This statement is counter-intuitive in ...

Hi! Beautiful start, very intriguing! But I'm going right into the meat of it as I'm in a bit of a hurry. Victor gazed his eyes down at the letter ...

So my story is called After Life. This is chapter one. It actually seems just up your alley as I couldn't decide between sci fi, fantasy, paranormal, or other to ...

Hey would you mind reviewing chapter one of my novel? Its sort of a sci-fi, fantasy, paranormal mix. I wasn't even really sure where to put it. It's long, but ...

This is chapter one. I'm not so much looking for a detailed review yet, more of overall views, and larger problems with plot or characters. Thanks! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ These days everything ...

This definetly has some potiental as a novel. It's cool because it's kind of a recurring theme in todays fiction, but you manage it in a new way. And it's ...

Don't be weak Don't be weak Don't give in to too soft lips And compliant eyes And repeatedly hard apologies Don't sigh Don't cry On christmas day Her dirty blonde ...

Can you feel the memory? Part of you still lives there In that smell of chalkdust and textbooks In the feel of name-etched desks and writer's callous' In the taste ...

Mmmm. This is good stuff you got here. Let us see if I can play a small part in this greatness, shall we? Always spin the same direction. Because they ...

Mmmm. This is good stuff you got here. Let us see if I can play a small part in this greatness, shall we? Always spin the same direction. Because they ...

Hello. This is... intriguing to say the least. I have to agree with In_The_Moonlight that the small intro you have doesn't really seem like a preface. The reason for this ...

Just letting you know that I'm yet another reader who has grown addicted to this story. I'm taking six classes right now, but after my next one I'll try to ...

Now you did kill Gave 'ol satan a thrill Now you did kill And it's killing you still Those are some suggestions. The idea is okay, but I personally didn't ...

Mmmm. Completly satisfying. It's rare that such a short peice of writing can have such a physical effect on me. Wonderful! Some little tips, though, because I'm trying to be ...