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Re: HSM in RL chapter 3:
Oops sorry for confusing you! I meant that the language is immature. Has nothing to do with the age at all ;p It just made me squick. Plus HSM is ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: The Scient Witch: Prologue [Now Edited]
Thank you Demeter, Dynamo, V12dude for the comments :)! Your crit has been a ray of sunshine on something I have never bbeen happy with. So thank you for making ...
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Fear
I agree with the two people above me; stop being comma-happy and start italicizing. You have a great vocabulary and I am very very jealous of you, big time. Such ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: The Scient Witch: Prologue [Now Edited]
Thank you so much for the crit. I've never been happy with that Prologue; it was written some years ago and I've never known how to make it better without ...
May 29, 2008