Sourire

Bonjour, Nikayla. And sure he decapitated anyone he didn't agree with, only protected those with blood threads connected to his wrists and tuned out others' ideas, his mind is open ...

Bonjour, Thundahguy. I am glad to see the next chapter is out. As before, comments and corrections on all grammar mistakes and writing styles will be in the spoiler below. ...

Bonjour, SaveDodosNopeTooLate. Grammar comments and corrections are in the spoiler below. When I see parts of me covering a building, a head, or even the sky, I feel as drab ...

Bonjour, screamingsloth. I'll start off with criticism which is contained in the spoiler then go into the positives of this piece at the end of the review. The tires soon ...

Bonjour, Thundahguy. All grammar and writing comments are in the spoiler below. As she walked on, Avery could feel had the sneaking suspicion that something was following her. The sound ...

Bonjour, bvbAngel. I feel as if with each step I take I fall apart even more. Like W ith each memory that pops up I become more distracted from reality ...

Bonjour, Rosendorn. All criticism and comments on the writing are in the spoiler below. Chandi tried to offer something, at one point. All I could do was shove her away. ...

Bonjour, midnightdreary. I very much enjoyed the look of this poem. It's very different from the others that I have come across as the size of the letters are a ...

Bonjour, Machupicchu14. I regret to say that since this is so short there isn't much I can comment on other than the length, style, and imagery. All of which I ...

Bonjour, SunsetTree. The title to this poem is very alluring. It in end is what brought me here, however, the meaning or mood of the poem is lost to me ...

Bonjour, LeutnantSchweinehund. Although I am not entirely a fan of horror, I enjoy thriller and this very interesting to me. The whole story is original with the Prof. Janáček writing ...

Bonjour, Pernicus. This poem you have written isn't a very common one to come across in that there is a riddle involved within the rhymes. I'm not very skilled at ...

Bonjour, myjaspercat. I am going to start off with criticism then work my way into compliments or positive thoughts. Huge wall of text here: I don't even like cats y ...