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Re: Time Passes
Hello! Ellen here, I'm so excited to read and review your wonderful work! First Readthrough/Impression There's so much beautiful imagery here. It's very vivid and thought-provoking. I don't know if ...
Jul 21, 2024 -
Re: Of Victory and Death - Chapter 2: Pippa
Hello, I’m Ellen and I’m so excited to review your wonderful work! First Readthrough & Impressions I AM SO INTRIGUED BY THIS STORY! Not surprised that it’s Greek mythology themed ...
Jul 8, 2024 -
Re: Our Quest
Hello, I’m Ellen and I’m so excited to review your wonderful work! First Readthrough & Impressions I love this poem! It’s so fun and fantastical. It reminds me of playing ...
Jul 8, 2024 -
Re: Chapter 8 The travel of self Part 1
Hello, I’m Ellen and I’m so excited to review your wonderful work! First Readthrough & Impressions I’m so intrigued!! What has Matthew done to deserve this chaining? What happened to ...
Jul 6, 2024 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 38
Hello again, this is Ellen! I went through and read everything and oh my gosh this is so amazing!! I had trouble coming up with anything to review because I ...
Jul 5, 2024 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 39
Hello!! I'm Ellen and I'm so excited to be reviewing this wonderful chapter. First Readthrough & Impression: First of all, I LOVE THIS! My favorite stories are the kind that ...
Jul 5, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 5
Hello! I'm Ellen, and I'm so excited to review your work! First readthrough/impression thoughts: I read the earlier chapters too to get a handle on the story, and I love ...
Jun 20, 2024 -
Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 4.1
Hello there, Liminality! Ell here with a review for your captivating work! First Readthrough: LOVED it. I really enjoy the gently switching perspectives of Lucretia and Golzar. It's very interesting ...
Jan 5, 2022 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 9 Part 2)
Hello there! Ell here with a review for this lovely work of yours. First readthrough: I am always captivated by your writing. You do an excellent job of making your ...
Jan 5, 2022 -
Re: Lorelei
Heyo! Ell here with a review. First Readthrough: This piece is so achingly bittersweet. You do an excellent job of creating your own reality in the reader's head. I felt ...
Jan 1, 2022 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 10.4
Hello again! Ell here working my way through your chapters :^) Okay, I'm just gonna dive right in here. Even though he looked impassive, she could see some genuine worry ...
Sep 19, 2021 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 10.3
Hello there! Ell here with a review :^) Very excited to learn about these ghosties! I keep forgetting how the prophecy goes, since it's all split up in multiple chapters ...
Sep 19, 2021 -
Re: Rite of Passage
Hello there! Ell here with a review. That. was. amazing. Full stop. I'll get to the constructive bit in a moment, I need a second to sit in awe. That ...
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 10.2
Hello yet again! I'm happy to be back for this second installment of the Tens :^)) Alrighty then, let's get started! Excited for another Rose POV. Somehow being in a ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 10.1
Hello again! It's Ell, here with a review. First of all, HAPPY REVIEW MONTH! And what a way to kick it off, right up tippity top of the leaderboards. Okay, ...
Sep 5, 2021
