Soulkana

@Tenyo, Yes I noticed that as well when I went through it; I just don't have enough time to fix it as it is..with school coming to a close. Am ...

Thanks for the review vison and I hope you will read the others lols! If you haven't already either way thanks for the review and I'll fix that later on!! ...

Yeah I noticed things were getting rather awkward at the beginning but I will fix that later on...I'm going to try and write this in third person next time to ...

I'm not sure if I want to add on to this mainly since I do not do good with historical writings.....since I really am bad at history nor is it ...

It wasn't common but some did. It was very common for no survivals but if people didn't survive then how did they recover? XD. Anyways thanks for the review and ...

Thanks I know I do tried looking out for it

thanks!!!!! its worth 30 points x.x wanna prove myself to my class

Thanks I don't know if I just misspelled that hahaha. I'll fix it XD Thanks for the review happy You liked it ^^

lol havent started chapter two yet am working on Violet Saga hahahaha. so XD yup

Haha Thanks I have problems with commas and I think I might get rid of them when I have edited this ^^

Thanks for the review formslipper. You're right grammar is something I sorely lack matter how hard I work on it, never comes out easier. I have always had the making ...

Thanks for the review you guys!!! And Freewritersavvy I will be revising and tweaking this to be more grabbing once I have completed revising the rest of the chapters XD. ...

Thanks for the reviews guys I just need to take a break from writing this week and focus on my essays for history so I'll store the corrections till then. ...

I do respect it I never said I didn't!! Also I was typing fast lols. So thats what with the I"m haha. And yes yes every kid has homework I ...

You made this even more interesting now!!! I want to know what happens please continue on with this!! The corrections really helped this a lot. Still leaving me wanting more ...