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Re: The Great Outdoors
I really enjoyed this! It was funny and random thanks for posting! -SoulSaver
May 3, 2011 -
Re: So get out
Amazing I could feel the emotion so strong and stable, this was a great poem and I loved how you wrote it filled with determination and strength! Great writing, hope ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Redemption Value #2
This was a really great poem! I really enjoyed the way the poem rythmed but how it did not rythme the whole time but still went smoothly and flowed really ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Beyond return. (First post on YWS!)
His face was frozen lost in pain. Helplessly abandoned in memories. Memories that twisted and ripped his soul. Ripped him of his heart, Ripped him of his mind. Stripped him ...
Sep 2, 2010