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Re: Havisham Dancer
Must review Persy's poetry due to missing her greatly...so... Woah. She was the c racked c eramic tucked in the c orners of the antique shops by the sea, where ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
This reminds me of the book 'The Book Thief'...did you get you inspiration from that? :) It's a really good book...anyway I loved this! Funny and brilliant! Oh, I've just ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Cold and Sharp But Much Too Small
Hey, Persy...I'm back. This seems really effortless. If this is what you can conjure up in a short amount of time then I'm definately jealous! Your writing style is right ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: When I Fell Pregnant [January]
Hey! I'm here to review this for you! Ooh yes! I ate Mum’s turkey, that must be it . Mum can’t cook to save her life so that must be ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: An Empty Stoup
Ahhh Persy, yet another brilliant poem! This is really interesting and contraversial, and pretty useful for someone like me who's trying to find the meaning of religion. My cry felt ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: The Journalist
Well, firstly I have two things to apologise for: 1) I'm not such a good reviewer so I'm just going to give you a few quick comments. 2) I'm under ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Arachnophobia
Wow Persy! I don't usually review poetry but these are my general thoughts: This is definately my kind of thing! Absolutely love dark writing. :D tearing the skin from bone ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: The Diary Of Harriet McCully Chapter 1
Hey Bug! Well, this is quite short so I can't really give a proper review but...I like it. This would make a good prologue for a novel rather than a ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Flawed Corrections: Verisimilitude - Chapter 2-3
Hey Doc! Well, I'm not a very experienced reviewer but here are some of my thoughts on this piece! : I like the first line; It's snappy and get's the ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: What You Really Mean to Me
Hey! Well, first things first...this seems to be a love song which isn't really my thing. It bugs me how artists these days seem to have only love, break-ups and ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Clements, Lemon and Crunch - Part One - First Draft
This is my kind of writing! It's not overly descriptive and you don't just put fancy words onto the page for the sake of it! Beautiful! The glass sped through ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: LakeView - Chapter 1
Hello, I'd like to review this for you. Dark clouds formed over Lakeview High that could only be a bad omen, but nothing could damper my mood today. Not too ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Flickering Flame--Chapter 1
Hello, I'm Sophie and I'd like to review this for you :) Firstly, you don't mention who exactly Carla is but I'm presuming she's a social worker or something? "You're ...
Apr 1, 2010
