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thanks guys :) your comments have been well noted and i am making the corrections now. I didn't realise there were so many mistakes *blushes* :wink: thanks again, it was ...

gee thanks guys, all these compliments, i don't know what to do with myself :P I'm not saying anything yet but if there are vamps i promise that if there ...

Hey thanks Lauren! I'm glad you are interested and in answer to your question, yes this is part of a bigger story where everything else will be answered. Thank you ...

Thanks guys and don't worry about sounding harsh, i really need critical feedback to make it better :) thanks all and anyone else who reads it please feel free to ...

Oh sorry :S i didn't explain it very well. My bad :P The voice is just meant to be her conscience but do you think it sounds too much like ...

Thanks :) i'll make some changes. x

Hey thanks guys, u really made me feel good :P yeah, this was one of the few parts i was fully happy with but im sure u'll see when i ...

Thanks Wolf! Ill take what you have said aboard and try to make it better! Thank you :)