Sophia_x

Wow this is really good I read all of your other chapters but i think this one is the best for description wise. The way you describe some things here, ...

Hey i'm Sophia and I'm going to review your work :) My sweat palm floated to my chest My sweaty palm whole greatness rivaled heaven’s I don't really understand this ...

I really really liked this :) you write with such emotion i don't think you even realise it. I like how she processes the the thoughts about what happenned with ...

Hey I've just been reading all your chapters and i am really enjoying it. I like how we don't know what's going to happen and as this is posted in ...

I think your idea is really good and well worth writing! Your prologue is a really nice start and i like how you described things, you really have an imaginative ...

Hey! That's really good! You've kept me interested and im desperate to know how he is familiar to her. I especially love the fact that they clashed at the beginning, ...

Hey Kate :) I think this is really good but the punctuation mistakes pointed out are well worth noting. i really like the beginning bit as you connect with the ...