SophiaBurnette

Wow, I see why you posted the image! The format was brilliant and really helped express the poem. For the first few lines, I didn't quite understand what was going ...

Hi, I really like the black and white effect. It causes the daffodil to really take the stage and demand attention. Keep doing black and white images, you're really good ...

Very strong and solid, but not overly rigid. The metric scheme was uneven…but I liked it! It fit in well with the artistic form of the poem. I especially like ...

This is a very poignant and powerful poem. I like you wit. You said you wanted readers to draw their own conclusions. Mine was that the speaker is going to ...

I like this! You should do very well in the contest. I like the silhouette of the girl on the cover. It adds an air of mystery and suspense, (even ...

SadieM- 5/5 I really like your style. a lot of your music seems to be a fusion of classical and rock. It's very nice :) My playlist: Dream A Little ...

talent is a bad clone of ability

Okay, my turn. I have been in a total of 12 plays/musicals (11 since the age of 11 if you don't count being a munchkin in the Wizard of Oz ...

Thanks for the reviews! :) I've edited the grammar, and later I'll look into the flow, the style, and anything else that needs work. Cheers!

That I'm Popular (from Wicked the musical) What's the best thing that's ever happened to you?

Hello, you can call me Sophia, as that's my pen name. :D I've had a passion for writing for…well for as long as I can remember, and I've been looking ...

I love this poem! It has a strong message that people understand and (unfortunately) endure every day. The rhyme scheme is simple, but that works well for the poem. Maybe ...

This poem is from a boy'ss point of view. He is torn between his best friend and his girlfriend, who are fighting. Here, he is addressing his friend and trying ...