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Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 7
Oh MY GOSH!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH.....LOVE LOVE LOVE :) :) I can't believe how much i love Jordan :) he's so sweet...and the twins thing :shock: wow, didn't see that coming but ...
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 6
ok, I read this a while ago and knew there was something i wanted to say, but i couldn't figure out how to articulate it. The other day I realized ...
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: Spelunker: The Ascent
I definately liked this...I liked how vivid the dream was and how it kind of connected to real life :) parts were a bit wordy...but overall your writing was pretty ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Escapism
I totally understood what you were saying about freedom, and by the way I do feel this way about music, but I agree with halogirl about the last paragraph. I ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: View from above
Wow, that was really beautiful. I loved reading it. I got lost in your descirpitons and felt like I could actually see the people you were describing. Have you considerd ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Taylor
I enjoyed reading this and it has alot of potential, but it was pretty rough. I saw at least one fragment and some other parts didn't make sense. I think ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Need Reviews Urgently, Please!
I really enjoyed reading this!!! I actually prefer more anylitical writing and this piece was a beautiful example. One thing I would say was I felt in the piece dashes ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: .
I enjoyed this alot!!! I love anything Dragon related and this had a ton of potential. I was a little confused as I went through it- there felt like there ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 1
Hey, I LOVED THIS!!!!!!! I'm a dragon lover and have read every book about dragons I could get my hands on!!! I only noticed a couple of things. One, you ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Remembering Emily chapter 4 part 1
One thing is perhaps it moves too quickly, I mean, the guy gets hit pretty bad...we can only guess how long he was out but it doesn't seem like it ...
Jun 26, 2011
