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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 7

    Oh MY GOSH!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH.....LOVE LOVE LOVE :) :) I can't believe how much i love Jordan :) he's so sweet...and the twins thing :shock: wow, didn't see that coming but ...

    Jan 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 6

    ok, I read this a while ago and knew there was something i wanted to say, but i couldn't figure out how to articulate it. The other day I realized ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Spelunker: The Ascent

    I definately liked this...I liked how vivid the dream was and how it kind of connected to real life :) parts were a bit wordy...but overall your writing was pretty ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Escapism

    I totally understood what you were saying about freedom, and by the way I do feel this way about music, but I agree with halogirl about the last paragraph. I ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: View from above

    Wow, that was really beautiful. I loved reading it. I got lost in your descirpitons and felt like I could actually see the people you were describing. Have you considerd ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Taylor

    I enjoyed reading this and it has alot of potential, but it was pretty rough. I saw at least one fragment and some other parts didn't make sense. I think ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Need Reviews Urgently, Please!

    I really enjoyed reading this!!! I actually prefer more anylitical writing and this piece was a beautiful example. One thing I would say was I felt in the piece dashes ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: .

    I enjoyed this alot!!! I love anything Dragon related and this had a ton of potential. I was a little confused as I went through it- there felt like there ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 1

    Hey, I LOVED THIS!!!!!!! I'm a dragon lover and have read every book about dragons I could get my hands on!!! I only noticed a couple of things. One, you ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Remembering Emily chapter 4 part 1

    One thing is perhaps it moves too quickly, I mean, the guy gets hit pretty bad...we can only guess how long he was out but it doesn't seem like it ...

    Jun 27, 2011


History repeats itself. First as tragedy, second as farce.
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