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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 7

    Oh MY GOSH!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH.....LOVE LOVE LOVE :) :) I can't believe how much i love Jordan :) he's so sweet...and the twins thing :shock: wow, didn't see that coming but ...

    Jan 10, 2012

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 6

    ok, I read this a while ago and knew there was something i wanted to say, but i couldn't figure out how to articulate it. The other day I realized ...

    Jan 3, 2012

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Spelunker: The Ascent

    I definately liked this...I liked how vivid the dream was and how it kind of connected to real life :) parts were a bit wordy...but overall your writing was pretty ...

    Dec 16, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Escapism

    I totally understood what you were saying about freedom, and by the way I do feel this way about music, but I agree with halogirl about the last paragraph. I ...

    Jun 28, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: View from above

    Wow, that was really beautiful. I loved reading it. I got lost in your descirpitons and felt like I could actually see the people you were describing. Have you considerd ...

    Jun 27, 2011

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: Taylor

    I enjoyed reading this and it has alot of potential, but it was pretty rough. I saw at least one fragment and some other parts didn't make sense. I think ...

    Jun 27, 2011

  • Article / Essay » General, General
    Re: Need Reviews Urgently, Please!

    I really enjoyed reading this!!! I actually prefer more anylitical writing and this piece was a beautiful example. One thing I would say was I felt in the piece dashes ...

    Jun 27, 2011

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: .

    I enjoyed this alot!!! I love anything Dragon related and this had a ton of potential. I was a little confused as I went through it- there felt like there ...

    Jun 27, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 1

    Hey, I LOVED THIS!!!!!!! I'm a dragon lover and have read every book about dragons I could get my hands on!!! I only noticed a couple of things. One, you ...

    Jun 26, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Remembering Emily chapter 4 part 1

    One thing is perhaps it moves too quickly, I mean, the guy gets hit pretty bad...we can only guess how long he was out but it doesn't seem like it ...

    Jun 26, 2011


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