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Re: -- Child's Play -- Some Rooms Should Never Be Exposed.
I don't really get the idea yet, but I can sorta tell where this is going, and from what I've inferred, it's gonna be good. Your main problem are spelling ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: What is Your Favorite Part of Writing?
I picked the actual writing. I just love coming up with a story. It always seems so magical... At least until I go back a few days later and think, ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Fragments, Chapter One: Escape (Unfinished and revised)
Chapter One: Escape Sam could hear it gorging on the last unfortunate person dropped into the Pit, and she knew it was almost her turn. She had studied the order ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Tonight
I wipe my face with the back of my hand. The salty moisture burn where it touches my skin. No one has seen me like this before. I think about ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler
Erm... that wasn't Kang, it was me.... Check the username....
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Fragments
I only have this much so far, it can be found on Sam could hear it gorging on the last unfortunate person dropped into the Pit, and she knew she ...
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Chapter Two : The Witch Hunter's Town
Hiyas!!! It's me again, well, here we go!!! Firstly, you're still having trouble using quotes correctly, just put this into Word and go to grammar check to correct it. Secondly, ...
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: The Writings of Sonlen Evandar Xiulta
February 1, 2008 I can sense dark presence near us, very near, much too near, I am extremely worried. I shall tell Kitar now. February 2, 2008 The presence, it ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: The Princess's Dragons
The Princess’s Dragons Many years in past In a place so far away Lives a story that will last For generations it will stay It tells of a princess dear ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Brokenhearted
There might be a few grammar mistakes but I tried to edit it. You make me sad. You make me mad. You make me cry. You make me want to ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: The writings of Sonlen Evandar Xiulta
Just so everyone knows, this has never been edited. The reason there is one edit shown is because I removed a lot of it. Explained in second or third post. ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Tear Drop
Wait... how are you exactly supposed to cry so as to get tears on said rose? Ya know, that was completely pointless to put that here, I'm guessing that it ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Lamentations of a heavy heart
Yes, I saw the "longling" part too. Anyway, I think that this could make a great series of poems that tell the story of the characters, maybe something like, "The ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: My depressing poems
I'm sorry if it isn't very good, I'm really a beginner poet. And I can only write decent poetry when I'm depressed. This poetry was originally published on the web ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler
"Villain who likes to laugh..." Judging by Paolini's plagiaristic track record, this is the new villain: The Joker. Wait--no, the Jokar. There. Now it's original. The Jokar is a laughing ...
Jun 7, 2008
