SoniiTiwari

I'll edit the breaks in the story. I don't think I can re-write it because the humor was supposed to be in my speech itself but I'll keep what you ...

Thank you ! :) I'll keep that in mind and edit this.

Thank you :)

Thank for the tip, it is helpful! :) I'll work on adding more dialogues in my stories, I just realised it's a big problem in all my writing

Thanks for pointing it out! :)