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Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Three
It's fine. XD Come back, tell me when they fix/ you get a new phone. ;)
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Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Two
Thanks yet again, Kanome! About your nitpick, I understand that it's not proper grammar, but it's kinda my style. I feel that I myself think in fragments instead of fully ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Two
Oh. Well, I'll look into that then. Maybe I'm remembering it wrong. XD
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Three
Thank you for the nitpicks Traunt! However, your second quote correction doesn't make sense. "My soul brother were gone in an instant..." What? Am I misunderstanding you? And yeah, we ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Two
Oh. Well she started laughing...and you can't sound quite sane when laughing at someone's death.
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter One
Thanks again, Kanome!
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter One
Thanks for the review Racket!
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Prologue
Hey racket! Thanks for the review! I actually did give some hint of what would happen, if very bare: I vaguely noticed one of her hands lifting from my shoulder, ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Prologue
Thank you!
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Two
What quote did you mean?
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter One
Oh gosh, yet again, what an awesome review. Thank you thank you. I didn't even realize the sunset time lapse thing. XD I should probably follow universal laws. ;) Thanks ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Prologue
Oh, Pompadour. You and your technicality. I don't know how you do it. I will take all of this into account. Wow. You are the best! Thank you so much ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Three
Thank you yet again Brunnera! What a lovely review. I will fix up those few points right away. Thank you yet again. You guys are amazing. :)
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Three
Thanks Mess, I will fix that. :) So glad you like it, that makes me quite happy. And Fin would never rip people apart, he's too sweet for that. But ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Three
Thanks kid. ;)
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