Someangel69

I got half way through and i was totally distracted so easily....however you story has a few entertaining lines. You used a lot of "i this" and "i that." Maybe ...

I thought it was a very touching poem, it hit me hard with emotion. Might want to check on the spelling i wasn't sure what you are trying to say ...

Prologue Alec kicked open the front door and walked through cautiously. Everything is turned over and papers where everywhere, but no sign that anyone had been there. Continuing into the ...

“Well, they found away,” I replied. shouldn't it be...“Well, they found a way,” I replied. but i thought it was a very well put story i couldn't find any spelling ...

LOVE THE STORY BUT... you have a few things that should be fixeded. i found a few spelling errors, and i also thought about the flow of the story. Your ...