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Hey, thank you for your critique. I am afraid you may not understand the idea of my poetry. That's okay, because I cannot understand most of Edgar Allen Poe's poems, ...

OH and...I am not a Grammar Wizard btw. Cuz, I is a writer...and I feel that puts the editor out of a job. lol :shock:

Cauldrens galore, licked by flames Spices danced in the scent of the air Through dirty prosecution and claims Repelling its force with will so fair A dancing maiden, stag, and ...

Actually, I really like this poem. I think it is fine the way it is. Also, I have been trying to convince people that poems are your own creations, don't ...

This is an AMAZING poem. It is so rich in our innate desires to love and make love. I felt like I was by a raging fire back in the ...

Thanks. The woman can be whomever you want it to be that is divine. Because he is a monk, and the woman appears at the beginning with no explaination. It ...

Once upon a golden vale Where heros win and villains fail A boy did grow both big and strong There is much more, but it's far too long Galeth, his ...

Wow! Seriously I really liked this poem. It seems very magical, and mystical. I almost felt like I was reading some old spell from an ancient tome or something. It ...

Looking over cliff and ridge Beyond the ebony forests mild Where there lay no trail or bridge No mans land, ferral and wild The sea, it be, claimed my eye ...

Welcome child, she said to me A woman's voice struck my ear Are you living peacfully? Without hate and without fear? My throat trembled as I spoke And this is ...

I really enjoyed your poem for 3 reasons: 1) I love Africa. I think it is an amazing place, and beneath all its trouble and conflict there is an extreme ...

A blaring, windy, spring eve Was when I had first saw Before I was just too naive Before the winter thaw A woman so pale her lips could curse Of ...

Hello KnightlyAngel09! Your poem is very beautifully organized. Instead of a young girl blossoming, I pictured an almost deity like goddess. I constantly pictured something like Gaia, being the absolu

There once was a young girl that lived in a world called Threa. Threa was a very large and beautiful world. There were trees that touched the clouds, rivers that ...

A very pretty peice of work! I am thinking you are trying to explain the the dividing line between truth and lies (reality and fantasy?). That it is wonderful living ...