Sohini

VERY EXPRESSIVE AND REALLY GOOD. THE ONES WHO BOMBED LONDON SHOULD READ THIS.

THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW. I meant to use the ADJECTIVE ‘gay’, which by THE OXFORD DICTIONARY means: light-hearted; cheerful or brightly colored. Why go for the offensive meaning which is ...

really offbeat 8) loved it. great writing style. do u really eat worms!!?? :lol:

I think u should work a bit more on the rhymes.

What an amazing sight it was at the bay. Instead of the sand there lay pinkish pink hay! It was the middle of a very hot summer’s day. Suddenly in ...

SORRY, but it would be better if u could be more expressive. i didn't get the theme of this poem. maybe it's too small. :?

I am believed to terrify each and every land, I have in my hand a deadly magic wand, With its flick, a curse and a quick wave of hand I ...

One fine October noon a screaming baby was born in a place called Barrackpore. The fateful day was 2nd October of the year 1991 (as you may have noticed above) ...

is this a narrative poem? it sounds nice and gives a nice message about humiliating others.

i did notice the rhyming and i like it . loved the third stanza. :)

great work. your narrating ability is fantastic.this poem was short and sweet. the poem comes as pictures to me. :) :)