Sohini

This poem was amazing but I didn’t like the way you concluded it. I think the cold, dark atmosphere which you had brilliantly created was marred by the fact that ...

Nice-very nice. The short and rhythmical lines are fabulous!! I really liked this: “As I hissed and fumed My very state did scare A rather weary moon” In the line ...

rereading-yes! re-reading-yes! re-re-reading-yes, yes yes!!! i re-read specially the HP series till i almost learn them by heart since we have Julius Caesar in my new class (equivalent of grade) ...

actually, the answer was totally wrong. don't look so hopeful-i haven't got squirrel cookies. would you mind tasting cat-cookies (fish and cream flavoured) your algebra grade: T (troll)

hello Nicole (the other name is a bit weird to type). i'm Sohini (you're probably thinking 'of course you are-i cna read.' anyway i'm crazy about cats, kittens, cats and ...

Unseen monsters creeping under your bed, Hungry, gleaming eyes watching your every move, Winged menaces fluttering through the thick, cold mist, Furry, fanged creatures crouching on your rooftop, The

Hmm… This poem is a bit unlinked and too bizarre. And it has a potential to be better. The way you’ve placed the “I write”s are unconventional but at the ...

Wow that was really great!! I didn’t come across any mistake but the line ‘Yes, my parents got divorced, and a marriage came to an end, but that is something ...

why won't you doubt it when there are millions of flying 'baboons brandishing a stick' around?

look i never read the second and third parts. i'm wrtting bout the first bit. here's what i think: Is there more to this?-the end seems very abrupt. Anyway, I ...

There is a grammatical error in the line : “are all that life has offer,”-this should either be “are all that life has to offer,” or “are all that life ...

how abiut no.7; eh??!!

i like the universally usual fav.authors: J.K.Rowling(do i even need to mention this?) Roald Dahl (does he count as Fantasy Writer???-maybe not, eh?) Christopher Paolini (of Inheritance trilogy) J.R.R

you can still carry on; and maybe you might outdo Rowling!! if you get a plot don't let it go-keep the story going no matter what. i'm writting a novella ...

I kept glancing at my wristwatch to check the time. The seemingly endless lines of vehicles seen through the taxi’s windscreen were like eternally long metallic snakes with multicoloured and ...