Sohini

nice , flowing poem and truly romantic! maybe you could shorten any syllable from the last line for better flow?

Snoink darling, thanks sooo much! *hugs Snoink* *gives her a cat dressed in a piggy costume* that really will help a lot with my illustrations too!

oooo pretty ponies!! i lik eth elast three unicorns very much. once again i appreciate your colour co ordination skills. i also like the thing playing the flute-whst's it called?

so this is Russian? do you know more of this legend Bjorn? could you tell me?

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

err..there seems to be something quitewrong with the flow of this poem. the first two lines make no sense to me. explain them please. the last line rocks!

ahh... fanks sphoink * eating potato chips at the moment* *offers one to all *

well wher's the inspiration gone? all poets arise and awaken for you still have to use my fivewords to weave a poem.... keep your pencils and pens sharp! *ahem* i'm ...

wow that was touchy and you wrote with much feeling. the word are simple and i love the way the poem flows

THANK YE ALL FOR APPRECIATING. i'll have to work on my punctuation skill, thanks Luck flower. i need advice:hare in the line- "So, the King was furious" for better flow ...

hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi! HI!hi!

The Adventures of Ivan the Stable Lad In a faraway kingdom, Over the great green sea, A King had an orchard And the orchard had a tree. The tree it ...

you ought to read this.Wiggy your poem is very grand and unique. i know a man with few yellow teeth, he brused trice a day the Toothfairy was kind to ...

the unicorns based on Snoink's new novel are so enchanting! i also liked the soldier-sandwich one. and Puss inBoots is as hot as always. Your work is neat and really ...

thanks for pointing out my errors; the repeated sentence wasn't meant to be used.