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Sohini

  • Media Reviews Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    You mean Paulo Coelho's Alchemist??

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Internet Interests

    That's a very cute poem. Er...one thing's bugging me though... My mouth won’t close Sure it shouldn't be "open"?? Cuz if you don't keep your mouth close, it'll be open ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The feeling that swirls inside me.

    This poem has potential but needs a lot of work on it. The very first stanza: (note you missed the apostrophe in don't) A feeling inside me swirls, Making me ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Beads!!!

    And I think I can see your reflection(hidden treasure)Razz in one of the big beads.hehe. Excellent observation...hehe.

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: It is love

    I'm afraid, I find this poem a bit too haphazard. You already have said it and it's true--it is in the raw state. Love is like hate I think this ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Foliage

    I want to there...Now! The shot is brilliant, completely balanced with the sky and the reflection. Maybe you should take a zoomed shot of the red tree, all by itself. ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Beads!!!

    Here's some beady shots! 1. Dreams in a Bottle 2. Purple Passion 3.Bejewelled Dolphin 4. Cheery Colours :smt031

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Fire Inside

    Oh, that's deep Aust. Thanks for explaining... it helped.

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Help squishy!

    Picture or will a drawing do?

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: A Writer's Schizophrenia 4/16/09

    Wow...you are such an inspiration. No really ... you are so devoted to your work. Well done !!! And good Luck!!!

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Fire Inside

    Hmm...serious stuff but it confused me. Points I think that are to be noted: Putting them in plural will spoil the fun so you need to keep the words in ...

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple

    This is an enjoyable poem indeed. The title caught my interest and good going Oct Girl with circle!! You have a fresh style, very light-hearted yet appealing. It's a break ...

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Odd Owl

    Ackk!! How do you do that?? All your drawings are so professional!! You should be an illustrator, seriously. This picture is very magical ,I like complicated book borders (like in ...

    Oct 22, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Bella in the Meadows

    Thanks!

    Oct 19, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Starry Night

    Wow...*jawdrop* Such talent Grace!! YOu really are a great artist, all your drawings are impressive!! Cool colouring! Love the magic world feel about this!

    Oct 16, 2008


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
— Bernard Malamud