Sohini

really cute poem about mother-child love. i really enjoyed the last line. the imagery is well done too although the poem doesn't seem to flow too well. by any chance, ...

hERE'S TO the Empire and Nodic Counail at peace!! Urgent Attention required in nepal, Sir! the statues i errected there, someone has chisled the noses and shaped them like apple-flavoured ...

grand poem with the universal message uniquely put. i think this line "through my veins, entranced by dizzying visions. "is a bit too long and interferes with the flow. and ...

Read this book before you die because it's all about squeaking teapots that write limerics on Leap Years and paints your picture on Sunday afternoons. OR... my fingers are aching ...

a nice start to the world of Poems. YAY! anicely written poem with a strong meaning too! Cheers to that! but shouldn't it have a better title?

i think the poem's first two stanzas are really well done and maybe you could have written more like those. the third stanza doesn't make much sense to me it's ...

i will repeat what the others have said-the flow is simply wonderful. the short lines work really magically to give a new and pleasant feel to your poem. and i ...

oh great grand Emperor Lamalama; thank you evr soo much for my province-sorry this took a while but you see, i was held back by the forces of the Nordic ...

as great and enchanting as always...your poem and the moon..

!!!bingo!!! *wonder why it took me so long to figure that out*

what happened to the Princess Kat's share?? and what do red stand for? and...where's the Trojan Sloth-who stole it?

i loved it!1 how do you do that? it's truly enchanting-the blurred pictures are sooo charming. WOW!!!! great work- you're a genius!

that's the most unique poem i've read....grand writing. excellent work!!

hey, i like this poem i think you chose the words very nicely and uniquely. maybe you could shorten this line somehow: "Lying in a sweet summer blanket" short and ...

i love tghe first one-soo coool, so absurd, so senseless and it's got a CAT!!!!! Yay!! the other avies are cool to.