Sohini

this is surely a complicated poem with a strange flow. the timing should have continued for all the stanzas or none at all. the choice of words too is a ...

hello again! thi spoem sure has a lot of power and feeling and i enjoy this kind of poetry. you really need to punctuate your work but apart from that ...

you need to work on the meter of the poem and shorten the lines. there's no definate rhymth to this poem but it sure needs one. otherwise, the idea's pretty ...

firstly, CONGRATULATIONS ON GETTING SUCH A MEOWTASTIC AVATAR!!!! secondle, this certainly is a 'leafly' drawing. i like the way the tree is half leafed and half not. (sorry for inventing ...

great detailing in the first one. is the second one a face looking like it's made in black sand? if so, you've done an awesome job, there's a fascinating 3D ...

haha.. i love the first stanza. the idea's pretty neat and you have written it very nicely. As Claudette has already pointed out, the 'bird' need to be plural-ized and ...

i think this poemis really well done. i like the rhyming as well. real life really well potrayed. this poem reminds me of two someones i knew...hint^^ anyway, i love ...

[quote="Kajal Lahiri"]This was the only unread Sohini work I found. Wonder why you have left it out of your book. This would have been a good one. [/quote] :( GOSH!!! ...

not to mention your mum and dad...

cool pics. i love no.4!!! happy mew year!

wwo you captured Nature so perfectly.i love all the photos. the lady bird's a neat job. have a grand year!

happy mew year. why do they mog? that's a pretty gnome — how do we know it's a gnome? the cyclops is cute (sorrry) and ze penguin is artistically ugly. ...

EYe think it's a great piece of art. great colour combination — one of me favourites! but maybe you should crop a bit of the blurred nose . whose beautiful ...

granted, but your best friend is a smanda4-eating sloth...beware I wish I were a pink hippo with purple wings

Merry christmas to you anyway to crit and comment: loved the first line and the last line as well as 18 other lines which makes me say that you wrote ...