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Re: Fuzzy Flower
It's nice to know that you don't edit your photos, even I believe that they should be left untouched. Hmm...about your shots, these are pretty ordinary shots. Since its flowers, ...
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: Gryphon
Do you give art lessons? I am truly enchanted with your drawings. This one is a masterpiece. I wish the stars were more special, they look too ordinary to fit ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: I miss you
Hey this poem is really nice. Simple but not the ususal "I miss you" poems. I think the details you've put in in so few words make it very fresh. ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Another Love Poem
This poem needs a lot of revising. I think it's really cliched and the rhyming sounds forced too. Sorry, but it really did not appeal to me much. Maybe you ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Mahatma's Grief
Before I go into your poem, please Capitalize the M and G in Mahatma Gandhi in the note. You're writing a poem on the Father of our Nation (That's right, ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Chasing Sunsets
Oh Wow!! That's absolutely a brilliant theme to come up with. I love photographing sunsets and this poem complete echoes my feelings. Firstly, great title and first line."Chasing sunsets" is ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: A Bitter Metamorphosis
Quite a nice poem. First, I'd advice you to put in more punctuation marks. Please do that. The first stanza is very beautiful, the words are very well chosen. But ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Jealousy
Congratulations on writing your first poem! *balloons and streamers* I like the fluidity of this piece. It's very fresh and precise. The short lines just add to the edginess of ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Sirius Black and Jacob Black are related?
So, I ask again--- Sirius Black and Jacob Black are related? O.O wolves and dogs are brothers right?
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Annoying cats that you can't help but love...
Cats rubbing against your feet is NOT annoying...they'r trying to show how much they love you. I Love cats, I think they all have unique personalities and they always make ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur
...And here I was wondering what Snoinkus thought of Twilight.... GO Edward!!! * Dazzles * Random Kittens !!! See Snoink---you love kitties after all!!!!!!!!!! Can we have a Christmas special ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Lake and Sky photos
Where do you live? I want to go there...the colours are fantastic. You have captured the reflections well. Very well balanced. In one shot it's maximum sky while in another ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: The Magic
That's a fresh poem indeed! Very well described...the mood of the concert hall is very well done. I like how the poem shifts from the guitarist's point of view to ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: My book cover for NaNo
Ooo...nice!
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: The Perfect Season
The last stanza looks out-of-place. The "joke" bit I mean... And..."rhyme" and "time" are very cliched rhymes. I liked the first stanza a lot, maybe you could write a different ...
Oct 29, 2008
