Sohini

Meow to you Suze, I'd be happy if you could review my first Romance story: Your opinions will be helpful. Thanks, Sohini.

you gotta wonder, how can a girl forget the name of a boy who comes up and expresses his love for her? Trust me, I know how fresh in tone ...

Please review my first Romance story. Here it is: Meow...

*bows deep* Thanks so much for all your appreciation...they made my day. first attempt at Love worked! I also like the unusual names---Fysti, Neel, Russet, Kyjo, Luvr, Slim Sam, and ...

Things Left Unsaid Twelve years since I last saw her. She didn’t even smile at me or wave a sweet goodbye when we parted at school. But then again, she ...

A good read. Warm and fuzzy narration. I take pleasure in small paragraphs and you’ve put in many. And the dialogues were pleasantly flowing and very real. The part when ...

I see you're new here. Welcome and Well Done! Really nice poem and the rhymes are almost always very impressive. The style id odd because the various stanzas have various ...

A new approach to trees. In the sense that it's very modern and not the wise type we expect all old trees to be. I enjoyed the rhymes and the ...

Wow...thanks everyone.

Am I late?And I'll be posting little posts at a time, don't mind --------- Jessica Groves As Rebekah was staring at her brother Jesse, Jessica let out a soft sigh ...

Please critique my Butterfly Photography:

10/10...I had a Douglas Adams quote last time but potatoes rule!

Neat style! And there's nothing to complain about the lines breaking at odd places, it fits in very well. Really, I am impressed by the easy flow of the poems ...

Welcome to YWS. First poems are always special and you've done a grand job! Congratulations! The theme has been put in a novel way which keeps the reader focused and ...

7/10 cute expression!