Sohini

Thank you for your review, yes, it's been quite a while. As you've pointed out, I too am a little skeptical about suddenly bringing in the authorial voice. I guess ...

Deferred “Look ma, balloons! Balloons!” The velvet coat with embroidery around the wrist. The coat was a pale pink. His mother’s favourite colour. He always wished that she had got ...

Here's what I have to say: "Shining from the crowd" "from" seems a little dodgy. Would it be better to use shining "in the crowd", you stand apart from the ...

Strong stuff! The second stanza, imagery wise is the strongest. The bitterness is real. What I liked immediately about your poem was the hot and cold tropes, it is used ...

YWS welcomes you! I like the ending. It gives the feeling of yearning very well. You have used simple words, but well chosen and well placed words. I think it's ...

I am not a die-hard anime fan, but I did watch the entire series of Samurai Champloo and I think it was simple brilliant! The characters, the story, the sunflowers, ...

11/10. today is your lucky day. I'm the ultimate cat obessed girl!!

Inkheart and Inspell To Kill a Mocking Bird --Harper Lee A Tale of Two Cities-Dickens Twilight series

For vox nihili Hippocampus has several meanings: * Hippocampus, an anatomical subdivision of the brain, a part of the brain important for the formation of new memories; early anatomists thought ...

Oh, that's a nice style and colouring technique. I think the wolf should have a more intense and worried/panic-struck look. And no fire sparks? :-( Add 'em to make it ...

Nice and scary...like the shading. The aggressive stance is cool too. So is the snake tail!

The ears are too big and dangly. Your Eevee kind of resembles a rabbit, it should look more fox-like.

As a poem it's OK but aren't there too, too many of these "love you forever" poems? I don't want to sound rude but this theme has been trodden on ...

5/10 too loud colour combination and doesn't really show its significance

8/10 chuckle chukle