SocialSuicide107

Hello Lovely, So this pieces was really...I don't know awkward for me to read. There's wasn't very much given to the piece besides description (which I personally liked. In my ...

Hello lovely, Your piece was really good, and I think the fact that it's short makes all that much better because you notice the little things a little better. The ...

Hello lovely, I really loved this piece. As said in the other two reviews it was very original, and I was completely blown away by the end of it. I ...

Hello lovely! You've got a pretty good piece right here. I like the story, and the writing style you choose. It was well written. The only little nitpick I have ...

Hello Lovely! So I really like this piece, it's defiantly something different, however, I do have a suggestion. I was kinda confused about this whole Max thing. I understand that ...

Hello Lovely, Wow, I'm impressed. When people try to write something that has to do with rape there's always the why me type thing. I think the fact that your ...

Hello Lovely, So, I'm not really into war pieces, (few close friends going into the military) but I really liked this story. It gave a little bit of a different ...

Hello Lovely, I really liked this piece. It wasn't at all what I thought it might be, and at the end I was totally amazed. I thought it was going ...

Hello Lovely, So, I liked this piece. It's very different from what I'm used to reading, but good still. The past tense thing was already said, so I only have ...

Awe, this was so sad. I have to admit that I didn't see that coming. I expected her to be happy instead of feeling nothing for the person she was ...

Hello lovely, Alright, let's start with my nickpicks and get them out of the way, before I start praising this wonderful piece of work. First off, I felt like there ...

I feel like this story was very unrealistic. The way that Ann and Dean met seemed like you just put it there, just to put it in there. The story ...

Hello lovely, I really like this. There's plenty of emotion in this piece, and I like how you made her wonder about weather or not killing herself would be a ...

In poems you have to have a constant rhyme. AA BB or ABAB it'll give your poem a better flow. If you look at other poems on here I think ...

Hello lovely, Ugh, finally I get to review something of yours.(; Ok, so I really liked your poem. The message was easy to get and very uniquely done. The ryhmming ...