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Andy, Camren and Kacey were hanging out at the De Voir restaurant giggling at any hot guy that passed by. They seemed to have fun. "Check out that guy." said ...

Because you're not human like them...if you can call them human. Why do I like chocolate?

Hello there! It's a well written story. I could imagine the scenery with very vivid iimages. The idea of this story seems ver interesting , but I was slightly lost ...

MIRROR IMAGE My entire world is a dark grey cloud, all because I wield a silver locket. I lay on the grass and starred at the sky. There were a ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm also sot of new, but slowly learning. Have fun with...basically everyone we're few.

Please contine? I just started to love the story. Be a little bit more discriptive. It's boring to describe, but try to describe a little more.

It's my first time so I want you to be as critical as possible so I can find my errors.

You made me feel like the only one You were my prince, to you I would run I felt so safe when you were there Truth is right now you ...

I love the little dancing story. There is a problem though, it's not a poem so all sentences must have a verb and a subject at least. I personally think ...

The poem is truely insightful and I especially like the discription. Big things come in small packages and this is a really big thing. The content was welldone too.

Hello everyonr! I'm brand new! My name is Andy and I'm looking forward to having fun here. I like purple!