Snowery

Hey Rainbow Cabbit!! Thanks for your review!! Definitely not nagging, constructive criticism is always VERY welcome. :) You said that I revealed too much, what would you have cut out ...

Haha!! A middle ground for commas!! :) Now that will be interesting. I'm glad that this made sense :) And thanks I'm looking forward to posting it!!

No worries :) I can't wait to see how this story plays out.

Hey Cheetah!! Thank you for your review!! I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I corrected everything you pointed out!!! I reread it so many times but mistakes still slipped ...

Hey Mary97!! Thank you so much for reviewing!! I've corrected all the mistakes that you've so kindly pointed out (I'm terrible with commas!!) I just hope that it makes sense ...

I can't wait to read it :)

No worries!! I know how you feel. Sometimes I get scared that if I put too much description my story will get boring but at the same time its quite ...