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Hey Kyllorac! Mark Twain once said this, "The difference between the almost right word & the right word is really a large matter--it's the difference between the lightning bug and ...

Hey jolene! :D First of all, I don't think this is a prologue! A prologue is more like a chapter. What I think you want to know is if this ...

Hey Illa! :D First of all, I wouldn't call this historical fiction, lol. Mostly because one of my friends is pretty much an expert on pirates and... well... this isn't ...

Hey cpopkin! I think you're getting some terms mixed up! A prologue is basically a chapter that doesn't seem to go with the rest of the story which is put ...

Hey sargsauce! :D The way your stanzas move kind of bug me. Like, right now all of them seem like sighs. Like, they start off sharply and then they are ...

Eek! I adore Pokemon. Though I stopped watching the episodes after 151 Pokemon... I suck, I know. :P Anyway, by episodic, do you mean a bunch of short stories relating ...

Hey Lee! One thing I was really hoping to see in this HP fanfiction, especially since it's set 19 years later, was a deeper look in their characters, possibly through ...

Just a quick note... I don't know what the rest of the play is about (sorry!) but looking over this epilogue... it seems very short! That is, if this weren't ...

Hey Kylan! I don't think this really belongs in second person, mostly because it seems very specific, as if you're talking about an elderly woman. Not everyone will feel this ...

Typos! On hot, hot summer mornings, when the sun was so bright it could melt a popsicle down it’s stick and onto my already messy hands, I was allowed lemonade ...

Psh, there wouldn't be a crowd if the school were dying. :P It looks like Zoe is going to be perpetually in the friend zone at this rate. She really ...

Hahaha... ooooooh dear. XD Anyway, just so you know, you don't have to censor your literary work! That is, we don't want you cussing in the regular forums, but you ...

Teehee, you need to finish this fable, my dear Rocksmith! I would probably get rid of the introduction and dive right into the story! Unless, of course, you want to ...

Hey Alex! :D I feel sorry for Michelle! She's waaaaay too focused on looks. I mean, at a time where she should probably be worried about giving the speech, she's ...

Hey Gryphon! There is something magical about space exploration indeed! Anyway, I think, in this case, this was much too gimmicky for me to like it. I didn't like how ...