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My grandfather, an English teacher, thought this was the best opening line ever: "I like knives." Now, upon a quick reading, this is a very simple sentence. It has three ...

There's lots of good hints under the topic: Organization and Outlines.

Peridot is a gem that is light green, by the way. Hmm... closer but not there yet. And I like the adjectives... just not the order. Should I split up ...

Help me people! I don't know if this sentence is awkward or not, and it's driving me crazy! What's wrong with it??????????? "Small peridot butterflies were woven in her blonde ...

That's a very broad topic... What do you want to find out about?

I say that vampires shouldn't be really vampires. I think, instead, they are a fanatical religious group which is involved in canabalism and other unseemingly activities. So they're humans, and ...

"A Diary of a Young Girl" by Anne Frank. ;)

The only real way of sticking to a story is forcing yourself to keep writing. But, for the sake of clarity, let me be a little bit more specific. This ...

Read work by writers who are older than you about people who are older than you. The story that opened me up to the adult world was Jane Austen's Pride ...

I would say he teases her intensely until she begins to cry. ...but then, that wouldn't be quite romantic, would it? Okay, scratch that. I say he should look at ...

LOL! Well, unlike you two, I call them DOT-DOT-DOTs. It's really funny. My best friend overuses them in her stories, so I do critiquing and reading over the phone, and ...

I think you're confused about dashes, semicolons, and those periods (...). Periods indicate a trailing off. "I don't think that's a good idea..." "Hush!" Semicolons indicates a dramatic pause, which ...

*shudders* Thanks a lot for the help. It's kind of freaky... getting IDed by a tatoo with a number. Becoming a number instead of a human... weird. Does anyone know ...

UPDATED: February 4, 2006

For some reason, I only just saw this, but I can see how it can be extremely helpful. :)