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Hahaha... before I even read a critique, I stare at the computer screen, tell myself I can't write and that these people are just trying to help me, and then ...

Darn it, why is everyone picking on me in this thread? XD But yeah. You HAVE to support your dialogue with description in some form or another. It's really hard ...

Hehehe! Okay, for all those who don't know, I've been writing this novel called FREAK about five years. Obsessed? Nah... In any case, it deals with societal issues. What can ...

Er... not really. He's kind of getting oldish.

Hahaha... you mean Sadie's father and Sadie? :roll:

Haha... there are four types of stories. Man against man, man against society, man against nature, and man against himself. There are no variations. Your story may have bits and ...

A thought: The last movement that was nearly as big as this current one was the civil rights issues, back in the sixties. Many people are marching, some of them ...

Before you kill off ANY character, ask yourself why you're doing it. Why? Because stories that end up killing off their characters, especially main ones, tend to have very strong ...

Don't we all though! XD .... that's why it's handy to have an obsessive-compulsive personality as well. As long as you focus your obsessions...

Frequently. He seems to be my alter ego. XD

Then that's good. ^_^ In the land of writing, I find death threats to be a very useful tool. Another cool thing is when you take little dialogue snippets that ...

Hehehe... Just remember that when you introduce him again, you don't be flashy. So no "OMG, SEE? SEE? I AM A GOOD WRITER! I MADE A CHARACTER AND BROUGHT HIM ...

Hehehe... If you want to go for a more fragmented effect (I'm not quite sure you do but...) here's my attempt: Some people did know of Najra, but only because ...

Well, here's the thing. In Spanish, you have very lazy v's that sound more like b's than b's. For instance, if I were to say the word "voy," more than ...