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Hehehe... I think he's trying to say how language should be clear and beautiful. ;)

Last sentence, hehe.

Or the reverse. ;)

Haha... FREAK's chapter 5 was relatively easy to write! Chapter 55 was much harder though... hmmm....

I don't know... when I first read this essay, I fell in love with it. True, it's about politics, but it deals with how politics has manipulated the English language ...

For all those who love to print out their work, this is for you! This is a link of proofreading symbols... very handy. :)

When should you kill off a character?

Maybe this helps? You might want to consider coyotes. ^_^;;

What is so special that we have all this hooplah about private property?

She's too passionate, as she's introduced now. She would never do what you want her to do eventually. So you have to change her character. Think Norman Bates. You want ...

Hahaha... you know me. Anything that has something to do with torture and violence has me happy. :) If I didn't comment on it, most likely, I liked it!

Just remember! Titles are capitalized. If I talk about my dad, then I'm not using a title at all. He is my dad. Now, if I talk about Dad, I ...

Does he forget his entire past?

XD Final-ish version: The freak cast a shy glance at Sadie’s mother. She was gorgeous . She wore an elegant pale green dress, embroidered with a daisy pattern. Small peridot ...

How is it boring?