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Re: How to Fix a Story
Haha... um.. yeah. When I critique, I usually don't like going over the whole story. Why? Because the errors are so common throughout the story that I do it the ...
Oct 27, 2006 -
Re: Serious Work
OMG... my main problem was conflict. When I first wrote FREAK, I decided to put absolutely no conflict in it. And it sucked. So, to compensate, I decided to put ...
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: Guidelines on Synonyms for Said
What about interjected, i like to use that one in a disscussion where some one cuts across the convosation. Nah. Interjected is too obvious to use. That is, when the ...
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: Truth to fiction
I don't understand this question... perhaps you can expand it or phrase it in a more clearer fashion?
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: Until vs till?
Hehe... if you submit it to the publishers and if it gets accepted, it'll probably be changed to "till" again. Or something like that. ;)
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: Until vs till?
Well... writing it as " 'til " isn't proper. The word "till" is still used rather frequently. But it also is a matter of what genre you have it in. ...
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: Titles...
Er... I usually just take a phrase or something from the first chapter. So "FREAK" was named after "On one side in worn letters was “FREAK” and..." So yeah. Maybe ...
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Need Help
And remember, sometimes the best replacement for said is nothing at all. :) So like: "I have no idea what you're talking about." She rolled her eyes. "About the midterms, ...
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Until vs till?
Until Till I see "until" as a better bridge word than "till," if that makes any sense...
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Serious Work
Back in my younger days, I read some pretty depressing books, such as 1984 and Poe's work and other stuff. Well... they're not that depressing actually, but when I was ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Interrupting Dialogue
Oh gosh... I was reading an earlier version of FREAK and it was SO BAD. I was literally cringing in my seat as I read it because it was so ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: First and Third person
Yeah... and the article fishr is talking about (I think) is here!
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Please help me!
Oh yeah... the Empire strikes back is pretty awesome. So I chose that. But at the same time, I'm hesitant and sort of want to say Episode IV. Why? Because ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Writer's Procrastination
Meh. Sometimes writers block does exist though. Like, if you're so stressed out you can barely move, or maybe you're very ill. *feels argumentive* :P
Oct 20, 2006 -
Re: The Good, the Bad and the Inbetweens
Snoink's a good example of a five. Which is why we all hate her. I thought I was in between a three and four actually. XD
Oct 19, 2006
