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Re: Do you have a question about babies or pregnancy? Ask!
Hello! So! Because I am a mother of a toddler and about to have a second baby, I figured that maybe I can help out some of you with questions ...
Feb 23, 2016 -
Re: Native American Moral System?
Hi EverWinter! One thing that I always found handy when I was researching different cultures was just looking at their stories (such as creation stories and various folk tales and ...
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: need a scientific name
Commutatus Canis?
Jan 20, 2016 -
Re: Looking for brutally honest feedback on story idea
Do it! Do it! Do it! Though, I would probably tweak "overcome" to "work with" as far as disorders go, because these sorts of disorders never entirely go away, but ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: What would make a nice man do the following?
I like @Kyllorac's suggestion, if you want to have an orphan story. Another thought... think about the children and their particular attributes. Are they old enough to ask for help? ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: Star Ranking System
Go for it, @MaddieMouse013! :)
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: tips on displaying personality
One of the ways that helps me is to put the character into a tricky situation at the get-go. They'll have to somehow make their way out of the situation, ...
Mar 20, 2015 -
Re: How dark is too dark?
I wouldn't mind a little bit of blood and gore in it, as long as it is briefly described and not gratuitous. Blood is a part of life. Heck, the ...
Mar 18, 2015 -
Re: Why Isn't The Bible italicized or underlined?
Maybe because there's no standardized version of the bible?
Feb 27, 2015 -
Re: Research for my Novel
Pregnancy calenders and week by week things are eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeverywhere. Trust me. I obsessed over them while I was pregnant. XD Go check them out! They're sort of amazing. I flailed ...
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: Problems with a plot line idea!
It looks original! And, you know what the cool thing is? The more you write it, the more original it'll become! You should just start it and see where it ...
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: Excessive Narration
I liked your beginnings, actually. It showed some feistiness. I would probably continue reading it if it were a book. The trick is, you need to have a direction to ...
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: Verbose vs. Descriptive
Ooo! Analyzing paragraphs? This looks really fun. :D * Jayden sat at his desk, a rustic and mahogany painted block. I actually like that first sentence, because it seems like ...
Feb 6, 2015 -
Re: I just wrote the WORST story ever written
NO, NO, NO. I wanted that title of the worst story ever. :( I thought all I needed to do was write a worst novel than Atlanta Nights and was ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Naming the Antichrist
In the hyper-religious society with heavily Catholic overtones... why would "fate" even be an issue? I mean. Dealing with sort of stuff is a mortal sin for Catholicism. This is ...
Dec 23, 2014
