Snoink

Procrastinator! :o But oh well. You WILL write soon, right? ;)

Wait a minute? You mean FREAK is your book? :shock: The one you're writing? It's not out yet? I heard you talk about it on your blog and got hooked. ...

I love you.

Eep... I told the people that I were dedicating it to them. XD Yay! A published author! Has it been printed yet?

What time period?

MWHA! *pounces*

In smaur's excerpt, only the bold sentences are fragments: The ninth is a suicide. Again. Jumped off a roof and plummeted to his death. No relatives, no friends, nothing. They ...

FINISH SOMETHING. *stabs* ;)

Yay! It's a novel thought... having sympathetic characters you can relate to. ...ouch. Pun not intended.

AH! You should go outside! Out! Out! Out! *beats with stick*

72. Is "common" the official language of your world? Nope, English is. Because we haven't createst any other language. *coughs* Urethian? And, coincidentally, that language was made when I smashed ...

Hahaha... it's sad. Boredom is a beautiful thing, no? :D Just be glad you don't get my myspace bulletins, LOL.

Okay! In Incan's critiques, you'll find a lot of references to navel gazing. So what is this? Well, technically, it's staring at your belly button. That's very technical. So what ...

XD Oh dear... sick humor!

1. Does nothing happen in the first fifty pages? Haha... haven't written the first fifty yet, but OMG. I hope it's interesting! 2. Is your main character a young farmhand ...