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Re: Chapter endings
Not a lot of credit is given to where a chapter ends and begins actually, though it is an art. For instance, a couple of months I was writing something ...
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Re: Writing about Societies
I was reading an earlier version of my story the other day and it was SO BAD. I was literally cringing in my seat as I read it because it ...
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Re: Soppy Scenes
Sometimes, in the heat of the moment, you can write these horribly awful soppy scenes. Now, if you're lucky, then it's just narrative and you can cut it out and ...
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Re: Cliffhangers
A cliffhanger is basically a story that ends (or stops) in an abrupt manner. It came after that absolutely wonderful plot twist where our main character is hanging off a ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: Dealing with Messages
For all those who don't know, I've been writing this novel called FREAK about five years. Obsessed? Nah... In any case, it deals with societal issues. What can I say? ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: Scenery Descriptions
So, you have this really cool place and you want to describe it. Or, alternatively, you have this really boring place and you feel obligated to describe it, but for ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: Character, Action, Idea
I don't know... some writing tips make me scratch my head in wonder. I forget where this came from, but basically, the person writing it said that there were three ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: Serious Work
Back in my younger days, I read some pretty depressing books, such as 1984 and Poe's work and other stuff. Well, they're not that depressing actually, but when I was ...
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Re: Navel-gazing
In some harsher critiques on YWS, you'll find a lot of references to navel gazing. So what is this? Well, technically, it's staring at your belly button. That's the very ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: On Highly Structured Poems
My first tip? Get OBSESSIVE over metering. You see, rhymes will come and go, but what you need is a consistent metering. For example (forgive me if I use my ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: Using Grammar
A lot of people, especially less-experienced writers, underestimate the value of grammar. Which is more than understandable. Instead of the wrong spellings, which is easy correctable, grammar is an if
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Re: Dashes, Semicolons, and Ellipses in Dialogue
Semicolons indicates a dramatic pause, which is later finished. "This is not a good idea; it will lead us into danger." "Hush!" Ellipses (the dot-dot-dot thing) indicate a trailing off. ...
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Re: Dialogue Grammar
Memorize the following rules: “That sucks,” he said. “That sucks!” he said. “Does that suck?” he said. “That sucks,” he said, slapping his knee. “That sucks!” he said, slapping his
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Re: Me + Bad review = Poem
Awww... if you don't want to have this reviewed, you shouldn't put this in the literary forums section. Because that's where you critique stuff! Anyway, you really really need to ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Making Characters mysterious?
I wrote a short tutorial about this! :D Anyway, also have them be portrayed as different. My mysterious character is Sadie's father, and he is seen as different by all ...
Aug 21, 2007
